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I miss you by ~EsTur:iconEsTur:

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I miss you
It's all I have to say
You're missing
I thought it better that way
But it kills me
And I can't fight this reliance
I'm drowning here
Amid this sick, strange silence
I need you
To tell you what I feel
To hear you
And remember what is real
When we said nothing
But it said so much
When we ran away
To get in touch
I feel you here
So lost inside me
I need you now
Or I'll fall apart completely
I miss myself
That piece you still hold
This space is hollow
Leaves me so cold
I can't forget you
I never will
The way you changed me
Because I miss you still...
©2004-2009 ~EsTur
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Author's Comments

Well...I miss you, and I can't forget it ever... Some people remain imprinted upon our hearts and in our minds always...whipped this up tonight...it works...The pic is the work of * BlueBlack...check her out sometime, she's killer!

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~istarwyn Sep 12, 2004, 3:55:02 PM
wow you really are...

i wish i had someone to miss that much~!

--
Life: it's easy, there's a trick to it; you do it or you die.

"Dancing rats are always comedy, unless they're not funny." -Jhonen Vasquez
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~jackio37 Sep 13, 2004, 2:16:26 AM
You make this short in my mind, yet you start and finish it perfectly. I wanted more to read, I though I was going to have that unfinished feeling. But no, you completed me. That photo is perfect, absoloutly brilliant like this. It feels faily emotional in the middle, like the highest peak of this peice. Good work mate keep it up, O yes I am sorry gor your emotion of missing. But you express it well, and its good you can do that. Keep it up. Good work.

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Back and in white.
:iconestur:
~EsTur Sep 13, 2004, 3:00:42 PM
hey thanx....I try to express it from the heart and this stuff is painful...so I did what I could, see ya around I'm glad you liked it!
:iconestur:
~EsTur Sep 13, 2004, 3:00:54 PM
hey thanx....I try to express it from the heart and this stuff is painful...so I did what I could, see ya around I'm glad you liked it!
:iconestur:
~EsTur Sep 13, 2004, 3:03:32 PM
Ya....I wouldn't say that missing him is fun...But I guess if it produces poetry it worth something I hope...Man em. life is such a bitch sometimes....see ya around thnx for the watch! God Bless...Molester
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~DEVIANT-MISTRESS Oct 11, 2004, 1:52:39 PM
ok...
i love it!
just like every thing else you do!

--
"people fear death even more than pain. it's strange that they fear death. life hurts a lot more than death. at the point of death, the pain is over. yeah, i guess it is a friend." -jim morrison
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~EsTur Oct 11, 2004, 10:18:35 PM
You are far too kind and I appreciate it so much!
God Bless
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~aquariusbutafly Nov 8, 2004, 11:30:45 PM
i love this. the subect looks so cold and worried. i'm a big movie buff so i have another comparison. This reminds me of a scene from Lord of the Rings. the one where frodo (i have no idea how u spell it but u get the pic) gets like hyponotized from a depiction by the "ring". i don't know if you know what im talking about. LOL but that scene is in all of the LOTR (1,2, or 3).

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Trying to narrow down my passion so that I may focus and work towards a goal.
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~EsTur Nov 8, 2004, 11:39:37 PM
Thankyou!
Ya...I know what part of the movie you mean....interesting comparison!
God Bless

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"I saw this field that grew perfection, full of things you do..." -Boxcarracer: "Watch The World"

"Poetry is the opening and closing of a door, leaving those who look through to guess what is seen during a moment."
-Carl Sandburg
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~Spasmer Jul 12, 2006, 5:07:53 PM
I generally dont like poetry but this is... incredible... to say the least. Best ever. Really beautiful ;_;
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