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Beautiful beginning
so forgiven, young and
New
Shrouded virgin
of innocence
whispering white
Goodbyes
To past pain...
Goodbye to longing
and lacerated lonliness...
Farewell exhaustion
and festered fears
leave me now...
You have no place
Here
On the mantle of my
Hope
On the doorstep of my
Expectation
Leave me to revel
in this endless
Freedom...
To linger a little longer
On the edge of this
Change
This day
Labeled "mine"
And please
Just
let me be.
For I have found my
New beginning
Here...
Devoid of
You.
Forever
©2005-2009 ~EsTur
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Author's Comments

Kinda a cheesy idea really, but alas I had to pay tribute to this new year and all it has in store, new beginnings are so amazing...And the past has no place in it...So don't let it. This beautiful pic is the work of ~jess1586
I edited this one a bit, to make it more relavent and a bit less cliche(I didn't like some of the words, they seemed rather half hearted and just so used)...Meh, its a try.

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~abortos Jan 1, 2005, 11:10:16 PM
Mmmm cheese ... sounds like you need [link] Kills the past ... dead!

--
When my hair elevates, you can see my brain through a clear plastic bubble ...
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~EsTur Jan 2, 2005, 1:49:47 AM
Shaaaaaad up! Non of that mem eraser crap kiddo!
Its is a new beginning in more ways that one...
see ya

--
"I saw this field that grew perfection, full of things you do..." -Boxcarracer: "Watch The World"

"Poetry is the opening and closing of a door, leaving those who look through to guess what is seen during a moment."
-Carl Sandburg
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!Twilights-Child Jan 2, 2005, 5:57:55 PM
'Leave me to revel in
This endless
Freedom...'

I love this. it captures the whole feel of the poem in those 3 lines i think. =)
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~sqoggle Jan 2, 2005, 7:39:11 PM
You're good at personification.

Interesting concept

--
peeling onions gave me an excuse to cry.
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~EsTur Jan 2, 2005, 8:39:43 PM
thanx..its a bit random, but I think it worked.
I just love the purity of beginnings...so much endless possibility.

--
"I saw this field that grew perfection, full of things you do..." -Boxcarracer: "Watch The World"

"Poetry is the opening and closing of a door, leaving those who look through to guess what is seen during a moment."
-Carl Sandburg
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~EsTur Jan 2, 2005, 8:40:58 PM
thankyou...You think so?
Never thought of it.

--
"I saw this field that grew perfection, full of things you do..." -Boxcarracer: "Watch The World"

"Poetry is the opening and closing of a door, leaving those who look through to guess what is seen during a moment."
-Carl Sandburg
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~EsTur Jan 3, 2005, 2:53:34 PM
alright

--
"I saw this field that grew perfection, full of things you do..." -Boxcarracer: "Watch The World"

"Poetry is the opening and closing of a door, leaving those who look through to guess what is seen during a moment."
-Carl Sandburg
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~SAAj Jan 9, 2005, 6:17:31 AM
'you have no place here...on the doorstep of my expectation'

Several lines stood out beautifully, those two foremost. The emotion really comes through in this one; at the dawn of 2005, for the first time, I really did get the New Year vibe, so I can really feel the cadence of this piece.

--
Never say never.
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